爱吃辣的加拿大大叔
雅思托福10多年一线教学
中文说得还不错，头像是他家的橘猫
在这里分享他原创的雅思大作文和小作文范文
每篇范文都有配音，在他的公众号“英语考试Cat”
大家好，我是来自加拿大的雅思老师Mac。今天，我们来看看10月17号的大陆雅思大作文真题。老规矩，以下是正文目录：
1. 题目分析
2. 高分范文
4. 范文朗读
5. 范文地道词汇中英对照，包括：
- 题目改写
- 观点类大作文高分句型
- 展示“词汇丰富度”的高分词汇&短语
- 展示“连贯与衔接”的通用词汇&句型
上题：
The only reason for people working hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
审题：
- Type: Opinion 观点类大作文 ( 我的观点：no, there are other reasons)
- Body 1: most people work hard because of the need or desire for money 大多数人努力工作是为了赚钱
- Body 2: however there are those that work hard because of a passion for their work 但也有一部分人工作是因为热爱他们的事业
- Key word: 关键词 only
- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -
10月17日雅思大作文真题 | 努力工作是为了赚钱 (外教范文+音频+必备词汇中英对照)
▲范文音频戳这里▲
- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -
- (1) Introduction -
Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question 题目改写：
- only = solely
- working hard = work hard
- to earn money = make an income
Standard Phrase for the “Opinion” type essay 观点类大作文通用句型：
- An opinion held by many is
- I disagree with this viewpoint, as I believe…
Words showing Cohesion (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
- that
- in order to
- this
- , as
- there are those who
- themselves
- because
- they
- their
Vocabulary 高分地道词汇和短语：
- apply 集中精力
- diligently 勤奋地
- carry 拥有
- passion 激情
- (2) Body 1 -
Aspects that must be referred to:
- The only reason for people working hard is to earn money — most people
Standard IELTS essay phrase 通用句型：
- There is no doubt that
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
- the vast majority of 大多数的
- citizens 公民；居民
- to earn an income 获得收入
- the human condition 生存条件
- productivity 效率
- equals 等于
- survival 生存
- a sizeable portion of 很大一部分
- industriously 努力地
- with sacrifice 牺牲
- a sufficient amount of 足够的
- devoted 投入
- most likely be stated 可以说
- doing the bare minimum 做最少的；最低要求；敷衍了事
- exceedingly 极其；非常
- with fervor 有激情
- a wage or salary 薪水或工资
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
- , since
- it
- that
- There is also
- Their
- and
- so that
- they
- that they might
- if they
- Accordingly, it
- most likely be stated that
- regardless if
- , or
- , they only
- in order to
- (3) Body 2 -
Aspects that must be referred to:
- why disagree that people ONLY work hard for money—other reasons
Standard IELTS essay phrase 通用句型：
- In stating this, however, …
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
- propelled to 推动
- dedicate (themselves) to 投入到
- an overarching need to 首要需求；重要需求
- satisfy (their) passion 满足激情
- driven by 驱动
- a quest to fulfill 追求……
- an inner love or need 内心的热爱或需求
- undertaking 从事
- labeled as 被称为
- classic 典型的
- workaholic 工作狂
- provides for 提供；养活
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
- this, however
- there are those who
- their
- due to
- In effect,
- these
- by almost constantly
- This type
- , a (person) who
- , not for …, but to…
- There are also those that
- simply
- , and though
- them
- in the way that
- they
- because
- the
- (4) Conclusion -
Standard IELTS essay phrase 通用句型：
- In conclusion,
- , in my opinion,
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
- assiduously 孜孜不倦地；勤奋地
- a great many 很多
- occupation 工作；职业
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
- , it
- , no matter ___ or not,
- to
- , but that
- to do so
- , as it
- , that
- also
- because
- they
- their
今天就分享到这里咯，咱们下期见！
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